A thesis is never really finalized until you stop working on the paper, so don't worry if it keeps shifting on you.
Your synthesis here looks good; one thing you might want to do is include some of your sources' actual words--paraphrase has its place, but sometimes the actual language can be even better.
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Date: 2011-02-14 06:01 pm (UTC)Your synthesis here looks good; one thing you might want to do is include some of your sources' actual words--paraphrase has its place, but sometimes the actual language can be even better.